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06-05-2008, 08:09 PM
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Hi everyone, I would really like to get some feedback on two short blog posts I recently wrote entitled "No One Inside the Brain" and "Distinguishing Between Spiritual Fantasy and Reality". Any thoughts anyone might have would be helpful. Thanks so much, Ben www.discountenlightenment.com |
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06-13-2008, 12:27 AM
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06-13-2008, 03:51 AM
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You seem to have an extra '.' before the .html in your links. Anyway I read one and scanned the other. I had trouble getting much out of them. There was a lot of information and sometimes I got confused when you seemed to switch topics. Maybe I was just missing all the background information. What is the purpose of your blog? "This website endeavors to provide some measure of clarity and transparency on a variety of subjects, all of which share the noteworthy characteristic of being a piece of the gigantic jigsaw puzzle known as Truth, which we humans have yet to completely and correctly assemble." Maybe you could consider narrowing the focus a little. Rather than being a blog about a variety of subjects which only covers a little a bit of a really huge thing. Are you trying to provide information? Are you trying to help people? That's what I thought anyway. |
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06-13-2008, 01:01 PM
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Sorry that the links I provided don't work. My site has undergone a lot of updates recently and the URLs for my articles have changed. Here are the correct links: "No One Inside the Brain" and "Distinguishing Between Spiritual Fantasy and Reality" Thanks Jarrod for your feedback. I will think about the things you wrote and try to make my purpose in creating my site a little clearer. |
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