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Old 10-01-2007, 05:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default B******t - A Poem

I'd like to share this poem I wrote some time ago. Let me know what you think!

U think this is reality,
U must be living unconsciously.
Life aint supposed to be lived so morbidly.
See...
The sky is all I see.
She make me realize,
how big my problems, used to be.
She make me realize, I'm just a microscopic piece of eternity.
Livin' in a world,
fulla drama queens and dolla skeems
But I got Llama dreams,
shootin' positive beams.
Thas why these eyes,
they got that gleem.
Deep down inside they know,
that this "reality,"
is just a dream.
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Old 10-02-2007, 01:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like your poem Mitalp, you have real talent.
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