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dream 10-10-2010 06:00 AM

For all the Poets.
 
Can you make a poem out of these three words?
design, lipstick, sphere

dream 11-09-2010 03:31 AM

Too hard huh? How about warm, glow and light.

PraetorianX 11-09-2010 12:28 PM

In the darkness I sit
The glow from the candle sends my thoughts to heaven
The light that it casts takes me to new places
I gain strength from the warm teardrop that draws me in.
And with a breath, it disperses



Next words to use: Flight, care, wind

Lakshyayidhi Lakshmihi 11-09-2010 12:36 PM

Once I was a poet
Harsh words urged emotion to take flight
some one took great care to wound
I dissipate into the wind.
pretentious

Next words: Bold, cruel, Slice

PraetorianX 11-09-2010 12:38 PM

What words are we using next?

Lakshyayidhi Lakshmihi 11-09-2010 01:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PraetorianX (Post 750931)
What words are we using next?

Next words: Bold, cruel, Slice

dream 11-22-2010 10:27 PM

He sliced through my heart
with his ego cruel words
of love lost from long ago and
bold kisses which are no more.

Next words: touch, crave, mind

Helesinine 11-28-2010 11:38 AM

Oh how I love the sweetness of your touch
but the coldness of your words is just hurting me too much.
I crave to understand what's going on in your mind.
Do you still love me or are you leaving me behind?

Next words: snow, fear, tree

NDN Scholar 11-28-2010 05:33 PM

The snow has fallen, soft and white,
Strewn across the grounds, reflecting the sunlight.
The pine trees still stand tall and strong,
A scene straight from my childhood songs.
I know I will never again see your beautiful smile,
Feeling as if, though at home, I am banished in exile.
Time has passed, but the fears have not:
Can my heart move on, or will it rot?


Next words: fresh, comfort, strength.

Old Garrick 11-28-2010 09:02 PM

The fresh wind strokes my face.
I stand in the doorway,
It is time to go.
Comfort comes as I sink into the car seat.
The world before me is behind a screen.
When I am home,
I will sit behind a screen
And watch actors drown in money
By pretending to be the everyman.
At my labors,
I face the computer screen.
It has become my God.
When I can no longer stand it,
I close my eyes and let sleep come.
The night returns to me my strength.


Next up: Home, warrior, sandwich
They don't need to be in order, folks.

Bliss Sage 11-28-2010 10:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dream (Post 723502)
Can you make a poem out of these three words?
design, lipstick, sphere

By divine design
the most perfect sphere
ever-watchful in its splendor,
a faithful friend,
a lover to the lonely,
the moon shines down upon her,
a comfort
as a solitary tear rolls down her cheek,
she looks down at her purse,
and drops her lipstick back inside.

:(

NDN Scholar 11-29-2010 12:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Old Garrick (Post 765134)
Next up: Home, warrior, sandwich
They don't need to be in order, folks.

Oh, how the tide turns,
Procratination drives me to despair!
From the day's revelries now I descend,
Back to my sheltered home, fully aware
Of the needless hardships newly-made,
Within the confines of this short night.
The choice was made with the sun. Dismayed,
I must stand with the consequences,
Forced now to toil with the moon,
Wondering at the past absence of my senses.
Sandwich'd between these busy days,
Proudly lie the God-awful nights,
Full of books and papers, ink and pens.
These are the obstacles between the heights
To which I seek to rise, from far below.
I do not complain, this is the life I chose:
The warrior is gone, and with the scholar's pen
Do I now resist life's terrible throes.


Next words? Depth, disdain, sleep. :)

dream 11-30-2010 02:56 PM

The darkness seems to overtake me
bringing me to depths unknown

I struggle to rise, yet I fall
and light dimms in the distance

my dreams disdained of regret
guilt and hopelessness

Sleep overtakes my will to fight
Then I awake to life, yet, once more

*Your poems are all so good!
Next words: Call, Reach, Moon,

dream 12-07-2010 06:28 AM

I reached for the moon, as my name it called
and the earth kept me still as not to fall.

Next words: soft, love, snow

NDN Scholar 12-07-2010 07:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dream (Post 770560)
Next words: soft, love, snow

This is for them haterz!
You be thinkin' y'all are hot,
Well then, show me your grillz!
No dough and ho's? Ain't no big shot!
Your woman be in love with my swagg,
She's ashamed to be seen with you,
Check yourself out: dressed in rags!
Weak ass boy, you ain't hard, you soft.
Got beef? Bring it. You know where I am.
I be in my crib. Cold? Turn it up a notch.
I be drivin my ferrari, you be out walkin'
In the snow, takin' out your hate in life
On me, yo. So, mane, stop your bad-talkin',
Cuz we all know I'm tha hood star here, not you.

Haha, dope. Next words? Upwards, eclipse, stars.

Janine 12-07-2010 10:23 PM

onwards and upwards
with stars in his eyes
until his total eclipse of the heart



Next words:-
chill, loch, penny

dream 12-11-2010 02:28 AM

Surrounded by the expanding emerald mountains,
I skinny dipped into the chill of the loch,
enjoying the bright light rays of the sun,
on my glistening penny tanned skin.

Next words: lie, run, voice

NDN Scholar 12-12-2010 03:40 AM

To lie in bed,
At peace with the world;
That memory is dead.
"To your studies," cries out
The voice in my head.
I want to to run, but it states:
"Cast away the dread,
For you are a fortunate one:
You are well-fed.
Many brothers and sisters cannot say thus,
And starve instead.
You must succeed and never forget
Where you were bred."

I curse the world for this burden.
Tears have I shed,
Not for me, but for the people,
Who cannot move ahead.
Damaged and broken in the sands of time,
Our suffering lies unsaid.
But it is for my opportunies that they
Have painfully bled.
With this I ask God to help me, every day,
As I humbly break my bread.



Next words: shine, above, smell.

dream 12-15-2010 01:38 AM

Above all else he is an NDN Scholar in his own right
to make his mark, his purpose in clear sight.
Although intellectual, his poetic mantra shines though
and what he stands for is right and true
Integrity in seasoned conversation is stressed.
for the sweet smell of success, on him rests.

Next Words: red, hope, stare

NDN Scholar 12-16-2010 08:06 PM

I once met a girl who claimed
That flattery will get you anywhere.
I had hoped she spoke in jest,
But her eyes were serious in her stare.
I asked myself, "Who the hell am I to judge?"
Hey, I got a secret I'd like to share.
Life was hard and I lost track of truth.
I don't know what's right. Do I really care?
I think I know what's wrong, though.
And, by God, it's quite common, not rare.
I see it everyday, and two wrongs won't
Make a right, but they will fix a tear.
Right and wrong is black and white,
And the world is like a freakin' snare:
You're born into it, exposed to it,
Forced to make a living in its lair.
Depression, my eyes bloodshot red,
Forced to witness pain and despair.
I look to the treaties and days goneby,
Is this the vision of my forebears?
It's so unfair, I want to swear.
Deeply ensnared, can't climb the stairs.
I'm so unprepared, and I declare:
Of right and wrong, I'm unaware.



Next words, yo: birth, right, legacy.
Hmmm... I re-read my poem, and I think I exaggerated my view on morality. Oh well.

dream 12-21-2010 03:50 AM

What is fair anymore in life?
who can say they know the meaning of right?

From birth we are self absorbed
to the grave we take the broad road

How is it you truly want to live?
Why can't we reflect then solely give?

Leave a legacy for those to undertake
that says, in life you worked for the people's sake.


Next words: dare, face, gravity

dream 01-12-2011 01:08 AM

The greatest dare is facing oneself and seeing the gravity of your reality.
-Dream

Next words: Find, Habit, You

Whyshydude 01-12-2011 08:38 AM

When the guess is wrong
I find a pressure that was never thought
I tried to learn to love myself
So this life will seem to flow
Flowing soft and cool
Under pressure ....
I continue to learn to assess life
Under pressure ....
Giving hope to better
If I was a burden let me help you set him free
My love Do not you mean that abracadabra
A lover remains a lover though deemed Friends
All ready to sacrifice all ready received in full sincerity
If I is hatred, let me try to make you care
Attention should not you afraid of
A one who yearns remains a one who yearns even been dumped
There remained a moment without longing and expectation
If I was bored, it's time we reflect on this heart
Habit is a form of loyalty and repeat
A devotee and follower only obey adored
Because the only hero who can make peace hearts
I just let it go into the water flowing rivers
Until the end of time, until all peaceful :)

Whyshydude 01-12-2011 08:41 AM

next words : silence dear desire :p

Whyshydude 01-14-2011 01:55 AM

I'm in silence ... ....
Are you in the shadows with me
Are you in a far but close to my heart
I'm in your natural harmony
Eno, I want to always be in love
Are you beating me hope
My dear, you do love me?
Maybe you have something to share?
Are you in my life is everything
Are you in the tenderness of this love
Eno, will you marry me
I'm in the softness ....
It is this desire in the arms of thee
It is this desire in kissing you
I love you ... Eno :o


Next Words : telephone, ocean, mystic

DeniseG 01-14-2011 05:04 AM

In mystic dreams
like soft, cool ocean waves
across a psychic telephone
you come to me in sleep.

Mynder 01-14-2011 06:45 AM

The telephone I did not hear
Just turned and twisted in my sleep
I dreamed a dream that held no fear
but nonetheless I traveled deep

I stood among a dozen friends
out by the sandy shore
we held a man within our hands
I'd never seen before

He lay upon our arms that day
in the ocean's warm embrace
its tiny waves rolled on their way
they lapped against his face

the master put him in a trance
we lowered him under the sea
he gave the wounded leg a glance
and shook his head at me

he is too close to death to heal
his way to life too hard to track
and if I were to try I feel
I'd never make it back

a torrent rose inside of me
of wild determination
that I would not so easily
accept this situation

I closed my eyes and channeled love
the way that I had well been taught
but like a voice from up above
I heard the mystic's gentle thought

conviction and persistence
are boons to anyone
and in harmonious coexistence
we joined to heal the man


new words: ink, naked, clock

pinky3 01-15-2011 09:15 AM

The ink is dry
But the words are fresh in my mind
Like the sound
Of the clock in my beating heart

The words are fresh
But the message is old as you find
Like the pain
Of the old naked soul as it rests

Whyshydude 01-17-2011 02:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DeniseG (Post 802375)
In mystic dreams
like soft, cool ocean waves
across a psychic telephone
you come to me in sleep.

Are you real poem writer? :)

Whyshydude 01-17-2011 02:45 AM

A question always comes to mind
Where do I avoid this?
Does all this knowledge right?
From the star studded
Allows everything! Size and logic is not true for real {human}
There is a place where everything has been written ....
Not affordable by all our understanding of human
Controlling everything was hidden in a peaceful place
That that there only everything that is not captured by any {Allah knows the Unseen}
Prior to immortality, peace stories have {fantasy}
No one can speak responded
They dwell on the edges of silence
Once peace fetch
Eternity will blend with any form of yourself {alleged}
Am I among those deceived or mistaken?
Along with stories that do not require the meaning of peace I promised melt
Penetrating the invisible nature recognize, find the controller {Allah is the controller, his substance was on the sky}
Which will not be there given a chance even though there is {Allah will manifest themselves in the last world for His servants who later blessed}
In places no it sit and laugh at me {prejudice}
Myself to continue to take you wandered
The story of peace is still echoing in our blood
Indeed spheres that wakes me is there {fantasy}
When you lift the pen to begin to scratch the ink on paper
In my only thoughts are so deep
Goddess of knowledge has been frozen when entering the territory {fantasy}
Expanse of emptiness that poison that killed you ... ...
Removed from the crown of understanding and rules
Prove that there is immortality in you
By sucking the life and death {Allah who kill do so in the last world someday}
Stealing disobedience to the rules of the beautiful
How old are you my son ... ..
I'm not something that depends on time {dependent on Allah}
Is something that is scattered throughout the frequency ... ...
How I tried to translate it?
Attachment that gave the wound at the time and civilization
In my sleep myself is something that can fly
But the blood clot, but I was able to survive
Navigate the hallways much mystery
Everything is immeasurable wonders and miracles {miracles to the prophets}
Realize that blanket the unseen life
I'm not a life but I was a miracle
Peace that comes from the story
Once again come to earth and man to stop
Before continuing my journey to the absence of a far {Nature hereafter exist}
Before you remember you forget me
No one ever notice me here
Believe on the knife that pierces your heart
But this ceremony is full of tears
Believe in the introduction cremated remains be cremated} {banned
Then the fall foliage in the cemetery
Hallucinations will not penetrate the chaos caused
The story of peace, the chaos in the sense I
I turned into a life when you approached me
I turn into a male and named
My name was not important-unimportant
The most delicious thing you've ever felt
That's not far from me
Enjoy that creates a feeling to yourself
I'm still alive when the flavor is still there in you
The story begins with the prince of peace who sacrificed immortality {fantasy}
Revenge on infinity
Which has poisoned the chaos that started it all {not a chaos but God was the one who started it all}
When I began to understand the mysteries of a future {for the event sequence }
the shortened time span long time
At the time of the compressed space
And high temperatures also lowered
By late afternoon light shining earth
Letting the sun without rays around
Nightfall the stars leave the sky slowly
At that time I look at myself
Human silence without motion, only moving brain
Nerve-controlled environment, as if nervous environment
All parts of the brain controls the body and mind
Body flying and upside down over the soft soil
It was outside the skin of human esophagus
Clock usually rotates counterclockwise with
If there was an aircraft
He will fly in the soil
I wish there was a submarine
He will float in the air a bit dense
The sun around every planet
The experts are people that retarded his day
The mountains turn into valley
Vice versa
Disobedience to the law of nature is increasingly becoming
Light propagating at the latest to move as if nothing
Every human being has the gravity to pull the earth
Broad universe has a limit {unlimited, evidence: the sky is 7}
Being a mini and very limited
Change the mainland into a sea of
Change the oceans become land
Interrupted the natural cycle of all
All of the active into silent
All that silence becomes active
Daylight into darkness
Only a few stars sprinkled in the soil
Humans crave life of misery & suffering
Those who have no hope
Humans began to live forever
Demons and ghosts one by one began to die young
When the temperature does not measure the heat of the earth
Neural environment stimulates brain
To say I was so cold earth
Prolonged drought resulted in
Plants moved from his sleep
Walking and absolute adaptability to the environment
The river flows on the slopes of hills and mountains
Flow to higher ground
The world was already too far
Making a helpless human beings
All thinking is very narrow and shallow
The wind was silent and slowly began to blow trees
Because the earth stops rotating and is no longer evolved
Compensate for the Earth enlarges into a mini universe
No more empty lonely voice ...
Earth more and more to follow human
Following humans evolved in her soul
Man not a woman or a man
They only have the brain and brain
Food searching for them and want to swallow human satiety
The food was hungry ...
Dots of the universe has begun to enter
Among the sidelines of my teeth
Because the human spirit is very high gravity
Humans do not have a passionate
Although all of the naked body and soul
They just want the passion and the more stupid
To forever
Once again the human brain remains stationary and moving
Looking for the world too far
Limits only on the narrowness of mind
While cold temperatures slow roast
In misery and suffering
Coveted.

Next Words : cannibal, silk, roses :)


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