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Old 09-22-2011, 03:18 AM   #121 (permalink)
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Hours after you left
I continue to examine the traces you left
behind.


next words
signify intake why

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Old 09-23-2011, 02:46 AM   #122 (permalink)
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Author and Heaven [10]

Good looks and beauty and give the story in it
The stories that make the hearts of men carried away and drift
The mind impressed that's where people begin to affect others
Embedding behavior patterns consciously and unconsciously
Because the characters that has captivated his heart surely will try to imitate human
Why do man considers that its object is property?
What's the treasure? Whether that can be obtained from the asset?
In general, the man put on his property for the pleasures
For the powers, to ensure the needs of the next
For peace, for its interests in the life
Because of these two men vying for getting it
But some people say the treasure is just enough
Or just a little treasure
What a treasure it is the fortune that was given by Allah
There are many and there is little
There are a lot of effort there is no
Useful property is property that is used correctly
As per guidance from the straight path
For our purposes it is no exaggeration to taste
For others who are entitled to and for the path of Allah
Treasure that has been purified will bring blessing and peace
Property was also obtained with the streets of halal
People are full of concepts and theories in problem solving
It is used to help and simplify the problem
The concept that they make the guidelines they will compile them into a theory
In all the circumstances seem less than limited or practically not enough
Do humans signify do?
Because in a state of self-sufficient people sometimes forget
Sometimes men to prepare for the circumstances that are less
Humans will be divided into those who are desperate and the steadfast
The man who will patiently wait with hope and opportunities to try
By praying and pleading to Allah
People who are desperate will be forced to wait with great disappointment and regret,
did not accept the fate she has received with sincere
The human brain contains the logic, knowledge
Humans have needs
The brain's ability to find ways to seeking needs
Make people do the calculation and abstraction
Finally abstraction enables man to fantasize about the desire
Desire is created by the imaginary
Humans try to make it happen
Some can be realized by science and partly in another way
Time, space, matter and energy are the variables that underlie the brain works
But Islam is a guidance for mankind the most major of Allah
Because humans will gain eternal happiness in heaven
Heaven is a place created by Allah to mankind is elected
Allah who created the universe
Human knowledge will always be limited primarily to the case of the Unseen
Because the side Allah all knowledge and on the wisdom behind it all Allah
Some people join to cooperate in crime and dishonesty
They assume that they have achieved their goals with good
Do the same with people who cooperate in full with a good thing?
Certainly not the same person on the street goodness will get a better response
In their actual crimes in huge losses
Life with peace, tranquility and love is the dream
Life filled with pleasures and convenience is bliss
What do we do if we are in the tyranny of others?
Do we wait, or we try to escape from the tyranny that?
Should do things that are allowed and remained in patience
Because Allah's help is close to the patient
Human thought he could control and domination of other human
Humans are also thought he could influence others
It estimates it sometimes missed, because people want to like it
They look for good opportunities and ways that allow
To reverse the situation
I did not protest with the freedom that existed during this
But I felt this was due to the freedom I feel constrained
Freedom brings people to the climate of competition and natural selection
Resulting in the weak oppressed and controlled
Strong competing all the essential loss of freedom
Life push each other and very little time off
Freedom is essential is Islam, freedom in the world and the hereafter
Humans do not you all can run and create freedom itself!
This is where I live, you can connect yourself with me here
But your recollection with the full logic of knowledge is there any results?
Every detail of this nature reveal how capable you are with your theory
This is where you live as well, although temporary, if you do not want to know?
In the human poverty has a tendency to be rich
Humans like to treasure in the world is divided equally
Human poverty in trying to get rich with a variety of business
Humans start with a richer and deeper poverty
But most people still live in poverty
Here is the place I live, full of malice and arrogance
The poor will be enslaved, the poor majority tried to rebel
Without or with a regulation that occurs when the strong are allowed to win
Today everything is like that where you went you are tired
But light from the light will strengthen the soul with intake passion
Full coals trying to guide us all to be a winner
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Old 09-23-2011, 10:15 PM   #123 (permalink)
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Hours after you left
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signify intake why
Hours after you left
I continue to examine the traces you left
behind.

which signify the whys
to the intake of scars you left
behind.

Next words: wounds, hear, pursue
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Old 09-23-2011, 10:46 PM   #124 (permalink)
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Hours after you left
I continue to examine the traces you left
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which signify the whys
to the intake of scars you left
behind.

Next words: wounds, hear, pursue
The more I pursue you,
the less I hear you.
Or is this the silent voice of your wounds?

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Old 09-25-2011, 04:51 AM   #125 (permalink)
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The more I pursue you,
the less I hear you.
Or is this the silent voice of your wounds?

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And now, here we are again,
as we were in ancient times,
at crossroads of embrace
or sethered ties?

Next words: Art, find, depart
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Old 09-25-2011, 05:42 PM   #126 (permalink)
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And now, here we are again,
as we were in ancient times,
at crossroads of embrace
or sethered ties?

Next words: Art, find, depart
Before you depart
Make sure you find
The right place and time
to say goodbye
For this in itself is an art.
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Old 09-27-2011, 04:58 AM   #127 (permalink)
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next: exposure, welcome, decent
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Old 09-28-2011, 08:26 AM   #128 (permalink)
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Author And Heaven [11]

welcome...
Do not weak continue to struggle with the existing power
All will end in death all starts from birth
But after death there is life other natural
But if you want to enjoy and know a lot about the world is not prohibited
With the limits prescribed by Allah, do not be violated
As my conversation with myself in the heart
I do not lie to you with tales lie but it is really
May I know the secrets of this world by my eyes?
Perhaps because it will give you peace and a deeper understanding
Why do people learn about DNA, about the atom and the theories of physics?
Wants to know human nature to stimulate people to know everything
Humans do approaches that can be understood brain
When human beings live or once lived with resentment and hurt
Breakup, break up the ideals and profound despair
They will perform an outlet to be the one to ruin
They will look for opportunities to retaliate
Or would appear that the potential for evil actions
Uncontrolled emotions and mental illness
Unless people are given guidance of Allah in Islam the Straight
They will seek Allah pleased with destiny
They will always try to do good deeds
From a very old legend, the human soul wanders
Following his body to explore the fields of material
The soul that knows something and then do something
Where we are staying? Why is my partner so far?
Lonely by lonely soul adorn
The soul starts looking for a satisfying himself busy
Peace and beauty is the soul purpose
Desires is exposure the soul itself
Soul survivor and will clean the straight path of Allah
Bustle of the other lost souls who seemed to be straight is not deceived
Quiet soul is the soul that saw the right viewpoint
The correct point of view that comes from his Lord
Humans are happy is man in his decent joy
In the true pleasure is the joy on happiness
Fear and pain are a burden and barrier and happiness
Both weaken the arrival of humans in the early
But a wise man will take advantage of both of these
For pleasure and happiness by learning
Fear makes people will make the security system
The pain will make people find a cure
The wisest man who is returning to Allah in all things
And attempt to resolve the problem with the straight path
Whether humans will continue to strive after repeatedly failing?
Never give up, that patience really is a blessing
Land of our birth so far and we have to get there
A person who started he would end
And a good start, good process and good end is the gift of God
Yes, God grant me the pious wife....
Yes, God grant me the fortune of useful...
Yes, God add useful science can be charitable and pious
Verily You are the only place I depend
Feelings of the woman is soft, gentle to her because that's weak
She was often in a state of instability, then do not depend on it
The color purple like the color of delicious wine is the color of her love
Going to a safer and more dangerous to leave
The woman begged the attention, she wants certainty, her darling man
I say 'Time to sail, it's time together, time for exams, time for reality, time for patience, the place now, be thankful always, smile dear! Well so! '
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Old 09-30-2011, 02:34 AM   #129 (permalink)
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You are true to self when saying a decent farewell
a going which concludes all welcomes here forth
an exposure of heart bare, to bid thee, my dear, ideally.....free.

Next words: appease, rest, convey
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Appease my heart and return to whence we came
Bring my soul to the place where I will lay forever
As I will rest in peace when all are gone
The light from my eyes has lifted and gone
My soul takes flight and soars amoung the starlit night
My existence fades into the never ending
Convey my story never to repeat again


Next Words: reign, forever, starburst
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Hearts and Stars [1]
Unexpected way life is, to date here
From the cool change in hot and humid
Leaving love for love, goodness forever
Mountain Semeru rounded side, toward life and a new task
My journey is the odyssey of the time
A million drops of tears for the time, walk away
The dry time is not yet complete, so it must remain
Alert on health and reign the dust flying
I was nervous disease, please help heal. [delusion only]
But the disease is so severe
Creepage air my heart into a vacuum, take it to the starburst
Stars, radiate tonight my heart to heart
Let her understand, and feel and enjoy
The presence of the figure of my heart in a deep sleep at night
Accompany her in her own heart, embracing night
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Appease my heart and return to whence we came
Bring my soul to the place where I will lay forever
As I will rest in peace when all are gone
The light from my eyes has lifted and gone
My soul takes flight and soars amoung the starlit night
My existence fades into the never ending
Convey my story never to repeat again


Next Words: reign, forever, starburst
This is totally worth publishing.
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Hearts and Stars [1]
Unexpected way life is, to date here
From the cool change in hot and humid
Leaving love for love, goodness forever
Mountain Semeru rounded side, toward life and a new task
My journey is the odyssey of the time
A million drops of tears for the time, walk away
The dry time is not yet complete, so it must remain
Alert on health and reign the dust flying
I was nervous disease, please help heal. [delusion only]
But the disease is so severe
Creepage air my heart into a vacuum, take it to the starburst
Stars, radiate tonight my heart to heart
Let her understand, and feel and enjoy
The presence of the figure of my heart in a deep sleep at night
Accompany her in her own heart, embracing night
Whyshydude, honestly this is the best poem you have posted in this thread. It is absolutely moving. And so beautifully romantic. You're not that shy I see...
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Thanks for your response Dream, I give you one bonus Poem

here...
Hearts and Starts [2]
I want to see her dance, it's the beauty of
I'm here but my heart is still there
If the heart to speak, no words were spoken
Only a mutual feeling and trying to understand each other
I miss you so much, neither do you do?
How I keep so much inside that I coincide with you
Believe me, I always feel with you
Not be separated, perhaps not even our own
Because it is related to my illness, my darling
Do not let this passion in the wild, this is only our own passions unite
Temporarily separated for good. Do not be so in trouble
Write the meaning of myself also in the pages of your paper
In the pages of time and your heart
You've danced in every sheet of mine, along with my pen
Leave all the shadows of men besides myself
Because I wanted only me, neither do you
Do not lie to you because sincerity is beautiful
The wind from the fan cools the body
Body that just want one with you that there
The body is filled with longings
The music on my radio off and I sleep with you. [music banned]

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Your light reigns forth,
your truth is ever present,
your thoughts are genius
your love intoxicating
your joy shown brilliance
your strength sure vengeance
All Starbursts of who you are
both now and forever more.

Next words: Danas, Shydude, PraetorianX
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Your light reigns forth,
your truth is ever present,
your thoughts are genius
your love intoxicating
your joy shown brilliance
your strength sure vengeance
All Starbursts of who you are
both now and forever more.

Next words: Danas, Shydude, PraetorianX


derived from WhyShydude

to Danas ....
The seed that will blossom, grow beautiful
Strong was tough, seductive longings
The power that you feel, at once gentle soul
Your eyes filled with tears, my eyes filled with sad tears

to PraetorianX
Smile when remembering this
Meeting and hope for the meeting
Inside the chest sound simple with no strings attached

to Dream
I baby you baby
I was child you was child
I was a teenager you was teens
I'm an adult you are adult
I am the father you are mother
I am a lover you are a lover
I'm old you are old
I will die you will die

for lovers
Smile when remembering this
Flowers in the presence of me
Hopefully add to your happiness
Hopefully reduce the sadness
Relieve objections in your feeling
Flowers you will always smile
You want to conquer the you conquered
You give your all I ask extract
I give all my extracts that you want
Although you just shut up, you really want
When the juices that combine all feel alive
We are dear ... Will always be in beauty Or whether it will be the traces of beauty?
But still smile dear Is this love or sincerity to pretend?
May we enjoy it and are happy flowers
Our love is the love of good and funny
Our love that never death
the flowers never hurt
You know I want you Now smile, so nah! Well so!
Then I know you want me
I love u

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Thanks Whyshydude

heres mine
Danas, Shydude, PraetorianX

He was a shydude
He was part of the Emperors Praetorian X Guard,

But still he knew he must do what he could
to send Danas a hallmark card

For it rhymed as it should
And it made being a poet, seem not so hard

next
Intoxicating Lifestyle Episode
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-Thanks Whyshydude, you're a sweetie.
-Danas that was hard but you made it work. Hopefully I can do some justice with your next words.

I live a life of progress.
No negativity I allow around me.
No hatred to enter my heart.

My lifestyle is by far humble
yet rich in bonds, surround me
while love and luck befriend me

Each life episode is my teacher
to keep me close to the ground
and still, close to the clouds

Learning is all too intoxicating
I continue the search for beyond
a noble task I have not yet found

Next words: justice, link, savor
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This is totally worth publishing.
Thank you very much dream. It was a rough day that day.
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Tides bind us all in a neverending flow
The link to our past can haunt our future
A moment of the day can bring justice to the unjust
We must savor the life we have
The future can mend the past if we but try.
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Next Words: gasp, water, dew
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The Tragic Tragedy[edited]

Irvan 22 September 2002

I try to feel what you feel
Will I be able to feel, there is concern
There is no confusion, my honey, I assure you that the beauty
That being water I gave
Now you will understand or day after tomorrow
And surely thou sorry and gasp, that's life
Time of wandering in your rubble will arrive
Dew of tears actually existing
The days when you question it will always be
My gift is not a coincidence and the kindness
It was wandering the ruins where you later
Where is the compassion when it is the memories
Despite how bad I am; my beloved
Maybe I'm the only one of the most loved
If you hurt me, you do not understand
One day perhaps understand, that you will return
In the ruins of sorrow
Leave it so, because it is the desire that there
The beauty is not far from the confusion of time
Not always what we want it happen
Leave it so, my honey frankly I await
There in one place and a time of freezing and blue
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Life

I gulp of it's unquenching stream.
I gasp at it's insatiable flow.

It is the water sparkled shower.
It is the dew in my horizon meadow.


Next words: create, name, mind
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no need
Irvan, 14 October 2011

not need life is told
except that eye gaze
enough to remember the name
no more than a longing
carried in a dream and step
no need of wisdom was delivered
except for the lip movement
enough to create a sign
no less than joy carried in the beauty and warmth
two minds meet
we've stuck to the skin
wait for the arrival of the knight
of a deadly battle
is he coming back?
along with a small child and his mother
anxiously awaiting
no need of wisdom is learned
but sorrow comes suddenly
nothing more than remembering the child and wife
carried in the memories and hugs
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In my mind I can see the darkness around me
It calls to me and hides my heart away
The long night scares the child in my dreams
He whispers his name but I cannot hear
The shadows creep to overtake him
He screams in pain as their touch burns him
Down he falls, drowning in the dark
I try and create a door for him to escape
But the darkness overtakes him and he falls to the ground motionless
I awake, but all I see is darkness around me


Next Words: ghost, shadow(s), house

It is creeping up on Halloween after all....hehe.
Enjoy.
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Good idea PraetorianX.

Tina convinced me to enter yet at my own will
Arm in arm we stepped quietly in,
thinking we were followed by the creaks
of old burned Waverly Inn.

It was a castle of a house
with frosted breaths and webs all around
"What was that she said?"
Frantically looking around.

Shadows seemed to appear
from out of no where.
Shaped as ghostly figures
with huge blank stares.

Frozen we stopped at the bottom of stairs.
Peering up, time and breath stood still.
Then we heard..., "Come Join Us".
Out we tumbled, flying down hill.

Next words: Cold, Halloween, Creep
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Frozen we stopped at the bottom of stairs.
Peering up, time and breath stood still.
Then we heard..., "Come Join Us".
Out we tumbled, flying down hill.

Hehe....I like it!!
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It was late at night
When the monster prowled
And something in the dark
Made a chilling howl

The night was cold
His snarled breath on air
Up the porch steps he creeps
And I heard him standing there

A growl and a snarl I hear
On the other side of the door
I prayed for my very soul
As I fell to the floor

A slight knock on the door
A nightmare could be seen
As I opened the door
He said HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!

....So I gave him some candy, yumm.
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Old 10-20-2011, 04:25 AM   #146 (permalink)
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Irvan April 3, 2002

I like all colors, except black color
Because this color reminds me, my thoughts on how it's way thinking
{Change into glowing white}
I am a pessimistic and full of fear
{Be god-fearing person, thankful and patient}
Everything that happened made me doubt everything
{All of which occurred supposed to make you believe in the existence and greatness of the power of Allah}


I chose all except a dead end road
Because this road is my road always traveled
Although I tried to circle wherever the same result
I always end up tired and stopped
{You should travel Allah road that once passed by the Prophet and his Companions and those who follow it well, they were the pious and those who hasten to do goodness}


I'm friendly with all the time, except at night
Because time is the meaning of all trips of my life
Is time to leave me if I'm alone again
At times when the night comes, whether it's night there?
{Your act the meaning of life, Allah always watching you, night and day exist}


I admire all of science, but an exact science
Because the exact science that made me shackled and restrained in nature
Back to my house is the house of my imagination that far
{Do not fantasize}
Where the reality of it all, are the words pseudo natural
{The fact that there are }


I miss all the memories, but memories with you
Because these memories I was very impressed and pierced my heart
So I tried to forget you, let this heart calmed down
Memories are forever with you is not for me


I wrote to the hearts of all stories, but stories of love
Because the story is very simple but very confusing
End which is always two possibilities, or even a possibility
That must have come as a painful breakup


I'm looking for any meaning except the meaning of life
Because the meaning is merely vain and full of uncertainty
{Life has a meaning that is to find out who is really devoted and no, the pious will get contentment of Allah and gain paradise, the uncertainty on the human side is the testing of humans in this world, on the side of Allah and all have certainly written in the book real, unless Allah willed the others}
Not one life but the thought of this rapidly changing
{Hint Hold on to Allah so that no change of mind}
So that every moment of life is not the same and abstruse


I tried again, I drifted off again in the sky
I never will again, I'm on the edge in understanding
{Back!}
In a controlling, in a which envelops you.
{fantasize sheer}
I was in natural fibers are invisible and hollow
{Not you're still in the natural world, then fix yourself with faith and Islam}


I wade through all regions, except the mist area
Because this area is full of mystery and made me cringe
As if the after life, including in this area?
Have you ever there, and back again, ever? {Natural area is more particularly hereafter is the grave}


I love all hearts, except my own heart
{Love the heart}
Because of this led me to the dark heart of a black
{Please bring your heart to bright light religion of Allah, Islam}
How to deafness, silence and blindness become one?
I do not know but my body cells of many who know but still
{Know with religion Allah and blessing thou shalt be saved}


I made all the same, except the same happy
Because of this similarity tends to put distance between us
{Common pleasure in the way of Allah will bring us}
Another similarity would eventually form the difference
Looks like the death of a good man if he would go to heaven?
{Grace Allah that make that person go to heaven, and the good works it is as a way to obtain the grace of Allah}
Only the light-color-is simply the soul
All there, all of which, I'm lost
{ You get lost}
Loss of color, light and other gifts
I hovered in the vacillating and hesitant
Oh I, oh I help me, I'm drowning
Oh, I do not let me suffer more
Really bend in front of it to hell
So that the person who greeted me earlier, but he laughed
Though full of water around her eyes, oh do not
He's executioners sinners
In this universe to whom I take refuge?
{Seek refuge in Allah alone}
Oh do not pull my life, me, me is eternal?
{You still will die }


I listened to all my steps, but steps to death
Because this step is so odd and did not feel
Even I do not know whether the death was necessary?
{Death was necessary, so that man stepped into the next in order to account for what he has done in the world}
For what there is death, why should you to death?
{While death and life are the will of Allah and what is done there is a silver lining Allah and Allah Most Wise}


I enjoy the solitude except eternal solitude
Because solitude is centered on the theory of natural solitude
That no one can explain it well
That really does not exist, and only with Me
{You get lost}
That is spread in this increasingly integrated
{not possible when the spread was fused}
How do I kiss god if, loneliness is everlasting
{There is no relation between the two, both sentences are bad, because people will not kiss Allah, and man is not eternal solitude}
One word, one name that want to call in this illusion
My ama , where are you my Ama, I invite your soul
{Ama better away from you until you are back down the road is right because the way your mind ugly}
My Ama, I come into your soul, now, with night
{Do not disturb her, because I'm expecting good for her, hopefully Ama get a good person she loved and loves him}
Behind the earth away from the reach of the sun
My ama, oh My ama do you sleep?
My soul wants so close to your soul, may I fused
With you for tonight?
{okay if you're married}
My Ama, I really was in your grasp
Although I soon not here anymore
{you're still here and maybe your Ama would not hold you}

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Hehe....I like it!!
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It was late at night
When the monster prowled
And something in the dark
Made a chilling howl

The night was cold
His snarled breath on air
Up the porch steps he creeps
And I heard him standing there

A growl and a snarl I hear
On the other side of the door
I prayed for my very soul
As I fell to the floor

A slight knock on the door
A nightmare could be seen
As I opened the door
He said HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!

....So I gave him some candy, yumm.
____________________________________________

Hehe, how do you like that one?

Next words: mist, silence, fear
I read this last week but could not comment at the time as i was rushing to leave the house. I am glad I did as I loved the ending. I kept saying the last sentence over and over. It was definitely a good one.
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"I chose all except a dead end road
Because this road is my road always traveled
Although I tried to circle wherever the same result
I always end up tired and stopped"-Whyshydude

Whyshydude,This is my favorite part of your last poem.


I always present influential.
A star above the rest.
High heals and hair well done,
a person of high stature at best.

My name said, sends sparks of interest.
I've dined with the very best of them.
Expensive bags and fancy cars,
The most refined; La Crem' de la crem'.

At the wave of my hand,
words I need not say.
For the power of the elite,
men come and go at bay.

A lowered nod of the head,
when first meet and greet.
Primping of dress with crossed legs,
after properly one takes seat.

Remember to smile then eat
then smile and glance.
Then smile to step up
into his trance, when you dance.

At the end I bid him farewell,
with sparked eyes and 2 pleasant kisses.
Time has now surrendered itself,
the evening gone and it's me that he misses.
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