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Andrew Gubb · 03-17-2011, 07:13 PM

My new video plus article. I thought it'd be of interest to you guys. The video is 1:12 and is meant mostly as an accompaniment to the article, to give you a voice to put to the words.

Tell me what you think

There’s A Better Way To Do Everything

faithsdaddy · 03-17-2011, 07:26 PM

I don't think you've done yourself justice Andrew. I think I know where you're coming from, so I get your message, but it comes across that you're simply saying different is better, which is simplistic. I would also have a script, so that it comes across better and have a couple of practices first. I suspect you don't like the sound of that because you'd want to sound more authentic, but I think it would help.

I don't like to be critical, but I think in your case I should because your concept is top notch and I think you come across really well on this forum.

You could nail this Andrew.

Andrew Gubb · 03-17-2011, 08:16 PM

Hmm, thanks for the input and the positive comments. I'll keep in mind that you said that.

My friend said "simplistic" too but I think this is missing the point a bit. The post is mainly about the writing in the article. The video was supposed to accompany it.

faithsdaddy · 03-17-2011, 08:23 PM

Does 'keep it in mind' mean you're going to get me

I think having a video to accompany the article is a good idea, I would just re-do the vid.

Andrew Gubb · 03-17-2011, 11:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by faithsdaddy

Does 'keep it in mind' mean you're going to get me

Lol. my english is getting rusty.

Quote:

I think having a video to accompany the article is a good idea, I would just re-do the vid.

I'll see how the article looks to me in the morning. Maybe I will redo it after all. Or maybe not

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Andrew Gubb Family Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Nationality: British Soul: Otherworldly Current Location: Barcelona, Spain Posts: 5,960	There's A Better Way To Do Everything My new video plus article. I thought it'd be of interest to you guys. The video is 1:12 and is meant mostly as an accompaniment to the article, to give you a voice to put to the words. Tell me what you think There’s A Better Way To Do Everything

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03-17-2011, 07:26 PM	#2 (permalink)
faithsdaddy Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Surrey, England Posts: 660	I don't think you've done yourself justice Andrew. I think I know where you're coming from, so I get your message, but it comes across that you're simply saying different is better, which is simplistic. I would also have a script, so that it comes across better and have a couple of practices first. I suspect you don't like the sound of that because you'd want to sound more authentic, but I think it would help. I don't like to be critical, but I think in your case I should because your concept is top notch and I think you come across really well on this forum. You could nail this Andrew.

03-17-2011, 08:16 PM	#3 (permalink)
Andrew Gubb Family Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Nationality: British Soul: Otherworldly Current Location: Barcelona, Spain Posts: 5,960	Hmm, thanks for the input and the positive comments. I'll keep in mind that you said that. My friend said "simplistic" too but I think this is missing the point a bit. The post is mainly about the writing in the article. The video was supposed to accompany it.

03-17-2011, 08:23 PM	#4 (permalink)
faithsdaddy Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Surrey, England Posts: 660	Does 'keep it in mind' mean you're going to get me I think having a video to accompany the article is a good idea, I would just re-do the vid.

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