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09-05-2011, 05:02 AM
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| Banned Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Quebec city,Canada
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 |  First post on my blog, Impressions?
My new blog on personal development, what do you guys think about my first post? I know it's a bit short but do you think I'm starting well? Here's the link : consciouslifetime | A blog commited to help people build a life of their own |
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09-05-2011, 12:29 PM
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Honest? It was OK. Maybe a 4 on a scale of 1-10. The content could be polished up a bit more. It is a relatively short post. Most of all I think the design of the post could be better. Some tips: separate into pargraphs, use bullets, put a quote at the beginning of the post, use bold font on some of your main points. Elongate the post. |
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