Setting up new website: would appreciate critisism.

[Andrey K]

Very nice website!
Few things that other people have mentioned need to be changed, but I am sure, you will fix it soon.

Seeing how good your website is right now, I am pretty confident that iyou will experience success with it!
I am bookmarking it now, because I am interested to see your progress.

[RagsToRiches]

Thanks for the comments.

If anyone has further criticism please let me know. I feel as if the site is still some way from what I want it to be so I would appreciate any comments anyone has on everything from the organisation of the site to the content.

Rich

[spydermann]

Hey my friend, cool website so far!

but i did notice a few errors as i read the "self conciousness trap" article.

It was kind of bland and there were some typo's and grammar errors...

take a look:

"...In other words they would enter a room, do whatever their social programming had already been trained to do, and then left.

Initially after decided to develop themselves, self-developers begin...

This article discusses one of the greatest ephiphanies...

I have even met who became so frustrated and agitated by themselves "

Mis-spellings, wrong words, and lack of feeling in the writing made it a struggle to finish the article...but I'm liking the jist of it! keep it up.

And like the guys above mentioned, the lines "At worst we are the masters of our destiny..." and "reality management"...they could use a little more thought and creativity in my opinion. Strong quotes and sayings that attract people's senses.

In my living i've noticed that keeping a personal thought journal helped me to find my creative flow and also helped me to become better with spelling, grammar, and word usage. Not to mention it helps to ease self-conciousness and soothes the soul!

[Piercetheveil]

Here are two good resources for ya
Web design techniques and principles from Web Pages That Suck - learn good web design by looking at bad web design - Home Page

and here is a great one for writing your way into some cashflow and starting a revolution:

The Art of Non-Conformity » 279 Days to Overnight Success

[mypcandi]

Nice looking website did you design it yoursef?

[Misscpb]

I just wanted to sell well done on setting up your web site. I know how much energy and time this can take. Give yourself a pat on the back

[MyEyeIsOpen]

The main criticism I have right now is that the header graphic looks amateurish. I think you should stick to something more basic or maybe have someone whip you up a header with a better font and some structure.

[RagsToRiches]

Thanks for the comments...

spydermann -

I've implemented your suggested changes. However I couldn't find the "reality management" phrase in there any more.

Grammar and spelling are obviously things I can improve upon because that's mainly just carelessness.

Stylistic changes however may be a little more difficult to implement. I already strive to avoid bland and stale articles. Hopefully you liked the other content

Piercetheveil -

Thanks

mypcandi -

Yes

MyEyeIsOpen -

I guess my adobe PS skills aren't holding up

I'm already looking into getting someone to design one for me.

[spydermann]

Looking good. So what made you decide to create your own website? and did you do it thru SBI?

[RagsToRiches]

I did it using Drupal - drupal.org | Community plumbing

I did it because I wanted to learn Drupal to set-up a business with a friend selling relaxation (light and sound) devices.

Then I realised the site I had put together as part of me "learning" Drupal was actually pretty cool.

I liked it so much that I started crafting it into a project in its own right.

[neilward2]

I like it! Look's great to me, but yeah like others say, definately change the background or text to make it easier on the eye.