Can you tell me your opinion on my Blog Content?....

[solongotgon]

Im a new blogger. I enjoy writing on a personal level and my goal is to attract and be in touch with like minded people. I feel that my blog is not on mainstream topics.

I haven't done any internet marketing and I don't know where to start except maybe to comment on others blogs.

Please provide positive feedback on my blog. Thank you.

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solongotgon

[anitabrown]

Your blog content looks very good to me however I will suggest you to choose powerful niche keywords to target high organic traffic

[CJAnyasor]

The content is okay and I do agree that the keywords need work.

Since these are your first few posts, I think you're not "into your writing" just yet. What I mean by that is, you haven't yet found your voice.

Some advice: Don't treat paragraphs on a blog like the paragraphs you write for an essay. Imagine writing on a blog as a conversation you're having with somebody face to face.

Good luck on the blog.

[chrisrushton]

a couple of things stand out to me. firstly, you really need to change the bit where it says just another wordpress.com weblog in your header.

secondly, i'd look at hosting on another server since it'll be easier to monetize later. I believe wordpress.com won't let you post ads unless you pay for the premium one. Don't know if this is where you're going with the blog but since it's in business ill assume it is.

I use Ueuo.com - Free Web Hosting Area for my hosting, redirected through their nameservers to my owned url. They also have a 1 click install of wordpress.