Effective Sales Letter Help

[fdjaudinesjr]

I am trying to bootstrap my own service business but right now is bad at doing effective concise sales letter... i hope someone could help me construct a sample sales letter from this idea and offers :-)

*Service business is computer repair and maintenance
*Targets are people willing to earn extra income by referring me to people for their computer services
*For every successful referral that he/she made i'll give 50/computer

Special offers:
1. Successful referrals on or before Jan 27 will receive 200/computer, provided that customers reside within JP Rizal. Customers receive a free 2 hour tutorial on computers.

2. Successful referrals on or before Jan 31 and outside JP Rizal will receive 100/computer plus 1 hour free tutorial on computers.

3. Five successful referrals will qualify him/her to receive opportunity to earn 5,000 in cash.


Thank you all for your help.

[chopsaw]

Dear FDJ,

There are two very good books by Bob Bly on the subject of writing sales letters. One is "The Copywriter's Handbook" and the other is "Secrets of a Freelance Writer". I hope this helps.

[fdjaudinesjr]

Thanks a lot chopsaw! :-)

[joshbickford]

Dan Kennedy has a book called Ultimate Sales Letters, it's pretty good too.

I'd like to add this, if you can learn to write to someones soul, into their inner most parts, you'll sell em everytime. Figuring out how to do that is very tough though, and takes a lot of thought.