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Matt Willard · 04-01-2009, 02:24 AM

Here's my site so far: Giant Robot Invasion!

I'm eventually going to replace the titles with my own kind of bars, but other than that, I'm not sure what to improve. Right now I'm working on content, naturally, and I've begun my advertising by finding some other forums to participate in. The next step is to find some blogs to comment at and work with. I'm also preparing a unique article for said forums, or maybe as a main feature at another popular forum I go to.

That being said, does anyone have any suggestions on how I can improve what I've got so far?

David Cain · 04-03-2009, 02:28 AM

I would recommend having some sort of very short intro paragraph (1-2 sentences) that describes the purpose of the site. Internet people have ridiculously short attention spans and they aren't going to read whole paragraphs just to understand what this site is about and what it can offer them.

A little colored text box that indicates why they should stick around is all you need. Give them a reason. What are the benefits of reading your content?

Matt Willard · 04-03-2009, 12:12 PM

So, kinda like the about page, but on the front? I see where you're going with that.

04-01-2009, 02:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
Matt Willard Family Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,334	Site Feedback Here's my site so far: Giant Robot Invasion! I'm eventually going to replace the titles with my own kind of bars, but other than that, I'm not sure what to improve. Right now I'm working on content, naturally, and I've begun my advertising by finding some other forums to participate in. The next step is to find some blogs to comment at and work with. I'm also preparing a unique article for said forums, or maybe as a main feature at another popular forum I go to. That being said, does anyone have any suggestions on how I can improve what I've got so far?

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04-03-2009, 02:28 AM	#2 (permalink)
David Cain Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: The Canadian Prairies Posts: 274	I would recommend having some sort of very short intro paragraph (1-2 sentences) that describes the purpose of the site. Internet people have ridiculously short attention spans and they aren't going to read whole paragraphs just to understand what this site is about and what it can offer them. A little colored text box that indicates why they should stick around is all you need. Give them a reason. What are the benefits of reading your content?

04-03-2009, 12:12 PM	#3 (permalink)
Matt Willard Family Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,334	So, kinda like the about page, but on the front? I see where you're going with that.

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