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Old 03-16-2009, 11:19 AM   #1 (permalink)
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People i am presenting you some of the techniques which will take you towards the pathway of success read it and apply it you will see good results out of it.


Skills To Become A Millionaire
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Old 03-18-2009, 01:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hii everyone i thought people will like to read this but no one have replied

with a positive feed back neither negative.
so can anydoby tell me is this blog helpful or i should add more things in detail

Elaborating each 10 point

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Old 03-23-2009, 03:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Ugh, I tried to post a comment on your blog but couldn't. Not a very user friendly system, but it's not your fault.

Anyways, here is the comment I posted:

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I came from Steve Pavlina's forums where you asked for comments on this. I'll try to be constructive as possible here.

I'm guessing you read Steve's article on making money from a blog and wanted to try your hand at it? Or maybe not, either way it doesn't matter.

I find it hard to read and the spelling and grammatical errors are atrocious. I decided to visit your "I am a Money Magnet" blog or page, or whatever it is ( Navigation is poor so I don't know what is the home page or what is really going on). Just scrolling down and not reading the content I saw errors that made me cringe. This is a HUGE turn off to me.

Let me go over that again. When I skim your page and see that it looks like it hasn't been proof-read I don't even bother looking at your content. I simply can't be bothered to put the effort into reading something that the author doesn't seem to want to put the effort into writing.

Now I realize not everyone is a master of language (I know for a fact I am not, and I probably have several errors in this post, BUT I'm not the one trying to deliver content!!), but when I see nouns not capitalized, for example: "I", and I KNOW for a FACT that any half decent spell check will catch these I IMMEDIATELY see that you don't even care. And I'm not even going into punctuation errors, which are rampant through your writing.


Lastly, I would like to comment about your content. Now I'm going to put this bluntly. I didn't read it. I skimmed it and it didn't look like something worth reading because of the seemingly lack of care on the writers part. But from what I skimmed you are talking about how people get rich, correct? While you've outlined several general points (I enjoy the use of a list actually (Side note: Visualization is not bolded like the rest. Again, thrown together without care)), they are in fact just that: Generalizations. And while I like some of your ideas you don't elaborate enough, and from what I gather you could have filled it out and split it into several articles, or made a long article, but either way I found content lacking.
But here is my MAIN point about your content. Do you have experience? Are you rich? Did you visualize, and Try & Try? And that got you your millions?

I'm guessing not. Why? I'm prejudging based on your effort (Try & Try?) put into this article. And believe me, I know prejudice is wrong, but I can't help it in this case. I would MUCH rather read about something you are experienced in, or enjoy, or at the very least put effort into.


So this brings me to my conclusion. I'm sorry if I came off harsh in this comment, but I truly mean it to be constructive. I put this much effort into this comment to HELP YOU. And it almost seems like I've put more care into this page than you have.
But I do NOT, by ANY MEANS, mean to discourage you. I merely hope you'll take what I've said here and grow from it. Because on the internet your writing is your face and people WILL judge you by it. If you want to even come close to success you'll need to re-evaluate and try (& Try) harder.
Boy, that's a beast of a comment. And reading it again, it does seem harsh. But maybe it's what you need.

Anyways, good luck in future endeavors. I hope to see your blog one day on the internet as a successful and thought provoking site. But it looks like you've got some building to do to reach that.

PS - When I keep placing "Try & Try" into the text I hope you don't think I'm making fun of you. I'm merely pointing out that you should get into the habit of practicing what you preach for fear of coming off as a hypocrite. Otherwise perhaps you are preaching the wrong thing.


PPS - I really hope you read this, because it's almost as long as your blog post.
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Old 03-23-2009, 06:19 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ugh, I tried to post a comment on your blog but couldn't. Not a very user friendly system, but it's not your fault.

Anyways, here is the comment I posted:



Boy, that's a beast of a comment. And reading it again, it does seem harsh. But maybe it's what you need.

Anyways, good luck in future endeavors. I hope to see your blog one day on the internet as a successful and thought provoking site. But it looks like you've got some building to do to reach that.

PS - When I keep placing "Try & Try" into the text I hope you don't think I'm making fun of you. I'm merely pointing out that you should get into the habit of practicing what you preach for fear of coming off as a hypocrite. Otherwise perhaps you are preaching the wrong thing.


PPS - I really hope you read this, because it's almost as long as your blog post.
Ohh boy thanks for those serious comments i know about my bad english language, but I'm trying to learn more.

By the way I din't mind for your criticism i will take a lesson from this and improve.

I will try more harder to make my blog more user freindly.

Thanks for your repy
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Muzmilsa, are these traits or tips?
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Muzmilsa, are these traits or tips?
If you would like to see the traits of the successful people then go to my money magnet blog it is having a new post on the traits fo successful people.

very good post everybody must see. Check my signature
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I have just one question-


Are you a millionaire?


Because if you are, then you have authority to teach how to become one.

But if you aren't, you obviously don't know how to become one or you would be one already!

(So don't try to teach others how to achieve something that you yourself have not achieved)
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