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Orange · 08-07-2008, 01:19 PM

my website Is pretty much for anything to do with the county that i live in. I have a rubbish tag line on the homepage.
It says"Everything Cornwall, the site where you can find everything you need to do with Cornwall!" I really want somthing better. i just dont know how to word it.. also.. I need it to be somthing that works better for the search engines.
Thanks.

1000feet · 08-07-2008, 02:28 PM

Is there some local specialty or something the area is known for? Maybe you could incorporate that... but they can be overused as well

Mags · 08-08-2008, 03:49 PM

Pirates, pixies, pasties and more!

Or

Not just pirates, pixies and pasties!

(Okay, I like alliteration

)

PhilK · 08-08-2008, 03:55 PM

Do not go for the line you like best. It is not only about how it reads. Think about what keyword people looking for your content might use with a seach engine. Your tagline might not be the prettiest but it will generate traffic...

I will let you know if I have a good idea for your tagline.
PhilK

1000feet · 08-09-2008, 06:46 PM

If you have a few different ideas, you could test ads with different lines and see which ones are most successful.

08-07-2008, 01:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
Orange Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Cornwall, England Posts: 317	I need a better tag line for my website! my website Is pretty much for anything to do with the county that i live in. I have a rubbish tag line on the homepage. It says"Everything Cornwall, the site where you can find everything you need to do with Cornwall!" I really want somthing better. i just dont know how to word it.. also.. I need it to be somthing that works better for the search engines. Thanks.

08-08-2008, 03:55 PM	#4 (permalink)
PhilK Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 39	Tag lines Do not go for the line you like best. It is not only about how it reads. Think about what keyword people looking for your content might use with a seach engine. Your tagline might not be the prettiest but it will generate traffic... I will let you know if I have a good idea for your tagline. PhilK

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08-07-2008, 02:28 PM	#2 (permalink)
1000feet Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Western Canada Posts: 295	Is there some local specialty or something the area is known for? Maybe you could incorporate that... but they can be overused as well

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Mags Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 263	Pirates, pixies, pasties and more! Or Not just pirates, pixies and pasties! (Okay, I like alliteration )

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1000feet Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Western Canada Posts: 295	If you have a few different ideas, you could test ads with different lines and see which ones are most successful.

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