realignedliving
I have'nt had time to impliment your suggestions to the site yet, but it is on my list!
I have given considerable thought to what you said about my writing and how i write, especially the use of commas. I am trying to use more now!
I think writting a blog is very different from how i am used to writting. I am used to writting long research articles for professors and blog writting definitely seems to use a different style. more casual, less formal.
I have just posted another article, could you tell me what you think regarding my writing style? i have tried to improve it based on what you said. Still need to work on those titles!
Shamou
thank you for your comments about my blog design, i have also been thinking about what you said and tried to diversify my latest article. if you have time, please have a read and let me know what you think!
p.s. dont let the title put you off, it was a 3 parter so i was stuck with the title!
thanks guys!
here's my latest article
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