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Old 07-28-2011, 06:40 PM   #107 (permalink)
Helesinine
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Originally Posted by Whyshydude View Post
"I trust myself to have the power
To climb to the top of the highest tower
I see myself up there, looking around
Discovering new freedom I've just found"


I think It's the heart of your poem.
"trust myself " = "the highest tower" and "the power" = "freedom".
That words just like a very harmonious couple of words.
I don't believe if you wrote by your self, it's should be from great psychologist!
Thanks! I didn't believe I wrote it by myself either, it was a moment of inspiration.
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