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Old 07-05-2007, 05:26 PM
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Originally Posted by JohnPlace View Post
Jason, I stumbled your article (actually, I stumbled it twice, since the first time was accidentally with my wife's SU account) because I think you have some good ideas there.

If you want that post to stand a better chance of picking up SU steam, here are the changes I'd make:

1) A snappier title that communicates the benefit a reader can expect from reading the article.
2) Keep your first paragraph short (CopyBlogger recommends no more than 2 sentences) and once again, keep it focused on the reader's benefit for investing time enough to read the article.

Good luck, Jason.
Thanks... still working on figuring out how to title articles the most clearly (not just SU, SEO too).

And any comments you feel like posting are more important to me than traffic anyway, though of course the traffic is always welcome
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