Thanks guys.
The About page is very poor to be honest. I started it and it was posted before completion.
Now on reflection I think I was trying to use language that wasn't my own, probably in an attempt to sound professional. really i should have trusted my own voice and just written honestly who I am and why the site is there.
I added a testimonial page because I want the site to be a service for people and if they like it let them say so. I have made the service the priority and not the Social Networking features which are not the main focus of the website.
I want users to feel they can make a Vision Board with privacy if they want to and invite a friend if they want to but no be overloaded like other sites like MySpace. Those sites are about hooking up with people where as i want the focus to be firmly on Making and enriching a Vision Board.
I really appreciate your comments so thanks a million for taking the time to look at my site. I will actually take down the About Us text now and work on a proper version over the weekend.
Much appreciated - Scott  |