Beautiful sentiments C.F. Jackson… However your approach might be improved upon a bit…
People don’t much like preaching… or being talked at… they would much rather be inspired or be shown an example to follow…
You won’t like reading these lines… I know… but, only someone who cares will tell you the truth as he sees it… and, I also feel that you are big enough to be able to accept someone else’s point of view… that’s why I posted this…
The very best of luck to you… and see you at the top…
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