Hello Andrew…
First, it is obvious that you have read extensively in the Personal Development field and that you know quite a bit about it… however, it is also evident that, though you can talk the talk… you have not yet walked the walk…
You want to teach people how to expand and to grow… yet your personal achievement in that field seem quite modest by comparison…
There are thousands of motivators and self-help gurus out there who have already achieved much more than you have… so why should people chose to listen to you rather than seek the advice of someone who “already has been there…???”
Also, the quality of the writing should be improved upon… those articles are good enough to post in a casual forum… but they fails to have the professional touch necessary to reach today’s level of excellence…
So, my advice to you would be to seek personal success first… work on your writing skill… then, go out in the world and lead by example rather than with rhetoric…
Good luck to you…
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