Hi Steve,
Love the synchronicity here. I'm currently working on writing a workshop and was thinking about examples of 'toward' and 'away from' motivation behind intentions. 'Away from' motivation behind our intentions can act as subtle sabateurs.
Eg;
'not a hive of unconscious worker drones'
'not numbers or dollar signs'
'but it’s not OK to hide from our humanity'
Maybe you could substitute them for 'toward.' Is funny how they creep in and we don't even see them. The rest is great though, maybe a bit wordy. My intentions tend to get that way because I don't want to miss anything out.OOoppss there's that 'away from' again.
Lallymac |