To Glowing Face Man.
I like your writing style. you seem to be able to get your point across clearly. The onyl criticism I really have is more to do with site layout. It looks like a book/university exam paper. a wall of text on a white background. If that's the idea you're going for then great. Even the posts with smiley's in work better, just something to break up the wall of text.
Hi Aelle
I can;t comment on the french, seeing as how I haven't spoken it in 10 years and it's a little rusty. as was said before, the english and french may be better segregated on the site, or on different sites. You may be able to set them up as duplicate posts so that the english readers see the english versions and the french readers see the french versions. not sure on the mechanics, but it is likely that someone over in the technology forum can help you out.
As far as the english writing goes. It's grammatically correct and factual and well, a little boring. The sections where you've commented (like "coughTNTsucksballscough") are more interesting. They seem to have a bit more of you attached to them. The rest reads like a news bulletin. Perhaps, throw in a few more comments, regardless of whether they are positive or negative. I guarantee they will make it more interesting.
And feel free to read the sort of things I write and then decide on whether or not to pay any attention to what I say.
My Helium profile. i have a number of other things posted here and there, but this is the biggest collection at the moment.