Originally Posted by RandomJohn
Here's my quick thought. Take your intention above, and remove references to Christian practice and concepts. For example, go from "Him" to "the Universe." Instead of Sunday lessons, go for leading by example, or role modeling, or expression communion with Nature. Instead of sacraments, honor the Divine Within. Keep the last two sentences just as they are.
I love it, RandomJohn! Annie, I think what you have there is beautiful and RandomJohn has kept your beautiful, creative and careful text and done just what you asked with it. Brilliant !!