I also missed pauses like seeker.
Let your listeners enjoy the things you say.
You can't cut pauses to save time.
The second issue is that the video doesn't have a high energy start. In youtube you have to win your viewer at the beginning or the viewer usually leaves. At 0:30 you hadn't do more than announced what you want to speak about.
It's not like a toastmaster speech where they have to listen to you.
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