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Old 07-31-2009, 11:42 PM   #6 (permalink)
Orecle
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i like your writing but the site feels a bit bland. it feels like just another relationship blog. i think some soft images will change the feel of the blog. since it is about love it needs too feel warm and inviting. i need to feel the website represents my need to feel loved (from a customers perspective)
let me ask you a question

who is your typical reader? wat sex? age? occupation? wat are their hopes,fears and desires. wat one secret issue do they have that you can solve but they are to embarassed to say?
wat do you want your readers to feel?
wat do you want them to do when they read your articles?
wat problems can you help couples solve that nobody else is adressing properly, cos this is wat steve does

since it is about relationships maybe an image to represent love and one to contrast the despair of not being loved

also maybe you can put a mini pic with each major point in each of your articles. i have seen a few bloggers do this and it helps cement the point

ps i have heard numourous times that websites and books with a picture of the author do far better than those with out. people like to see the person they are getting advice from

Last edited by Orecle; 07-31-2009 at 11:46 PM.
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