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Old 07-31-2009, 09:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
Abitofzen
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I agree with Daffy, here (sounds funny saying that...)

Good layout... very basic, but those tend to be the best

Clear purpose.

Good content... but a little rehashed. I encourage you to dig a little bit deeper, or find some 'edgy' tips to throw in your lists.

A tip for yelling better, tips for using sex to transform the relationship, the art of receiving... things that virtually no one else is writing about.

Mix that in with your clearly defined blog and consistent posting, and you will have powerfully magnetic content.

keep smiling,

Ben
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