i think it's quite cool. i'm not a big fan of hip hop music myself, but i had fun listening to your piece for a few minutes. i especially liked that cosmic-bell-like thing (i don't know how it's called), the one which goes through all the song and reminds a music box or smth.
i also had an idea that this piece could be used as part of a soundtack/theme for some game. it has some mystical feeling/mood to it
p.s. oh and these chorus sounds, they sometimes bring to my mind the images of monks with faces covered under the hoods
