Well done Yooper, I really like the improvements you made to your homepage!! I have a small quibble with the grammar when people write like this.... with lots of dots... and ditch real punctuation.... (Am I a nagging cow or what!
) I find that style harder to read even though it is meant to be conversational - because I don't know where each idea/sentence begins and ends. And when I'm meant to stop and digest a fact. Maybe that's just my way of processing words, take from that what you want - after all it's YOUR site!
The main point is, you share lots more concepts about consciousness on your homepage now and that is GREAT!