[yoopersmith]

Originally Posted by Rebecca800

OOH I am so jealous of your site concept!!

Hey glad you like it! I really love yours two...my seems a little broad in my mind right now...I am working to make it more a tight niche...

I read the Stephen Laberge book when I was in my 20's...I kept the dream journal and the whole bit...your site re-awakened something in me...THANKS!

Your homepage video about consciousness is awesome.... where can I find it on Google vids, I'd really like to put this on my site too... (if you dont mind!)

I found this vid on Google video...it's awesome isn't...here's the link...I didn't make it, and as far as I know it's open source:

Consciousness Drives the Universe

- you could work in more concepts from the first video to get people REALLY excited exploring the site. Perhaps split it into sub headings: quantum physics, fractals, holographic universe, consciousness controls reality, etc.

I like that idea...

- Im not sure who your audience is, but from the videos it suggests your going for a smart / scientific approach. The thing about The Secret, What The Bleep, etc is that parts of them are dumbed down and thats where I lost interest. So I'd like to see your site put forward a more scientific, analytical point of view, in keeping with the videos. At the moment the text seems a bit touchy feely, not enough facts and education. Thats something your videos convey quite well, and if you could replicate that style in your homepage text... wow!

Ok...I have not met my audience yet...but I'm guessing they are mostly people

...really I want it to be everybody...but that doesn't work...so I know I don't like New-agey...too fluffy...I Don't really LOVE the hard science view either, but if I have to pick between the two I guess I will lean toward "less touchy feely" and more facts...THANKS!

- your first section tells us a lot about you (which is not a bad thing, SBI is all about bringing your personality to a website) but this belongs on an About Me page. Your homepage is to compel people to dive in, by offering an overview of your site concept and how it will benefit them. In short, too many words about who you are, not enough about philosophies of consciousness. You have limited space to get your message across!

Check...roger that...THANKS!

So if it were my site I'd aim to summarize the contents of that first video on your homepage because its such an excellent concept and its already laid out for you. Also, since this is quite an involved subject, dont be afraid to make your homepage a little longer. Thats your #1 sales page for your website, so make it work for you!

Check Check got it...

Best of luck!!

Thanks for the awesome feedback...I'm jealous of your site too...you're doing it right...I'm doing it...lazy...

PS I notice you have a page on Paraliminals - if you are at the monetizing stage you could sign up to the Learning Strategies affiliate program? Also you have a sub heading "Dream Play - coming soon" - I have written up this product with a review if it helps you: Paraliminals Dream Play CD by Learning Strategies

I am still working to get to 20 visitors per month, so I am not putting up ads yet...but I will...THANKS!