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fdjaudinesjr · 01-22-2007, 05:26 AM

I am trying to bootstrap my own service business but right now is bad at doing effective concise sales letter... i hope someone could help me construct a sample sales letter from this idea and offers :-)

*Service business is computer repair and maintenance
*Targets are people willing to earn extra income by referring me to people for their computer services
*For every successful referral that he/she made i'll give 50/computer

Special offers:
1. Successful referrals on or before Jan 27 will receive 200/computer, provided that customers reside within JP Rizal. Customers receive a free 2 hour tutorial on computers.

2. Successful referrals on or before Jan 31 and outside JP Rizal will receive 100/computer plus 1 hour free tutorial on computers.

3. Five successful referrals will qualify him/her to receive opportunity to earn 5,000 in cash.

Thank you all for your help.

01-22-2007, 05:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
fdjaudinesjr Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Philippines Posts: 22	Effective Sales Letter Help I am trying to bootstrap my own service business but right now is bad at doing effective concise sales letter... i hope someone could help me construct a sample sales letter from this idea and offers :-) Service business is computer repair and maintenance Targets are people willing to earn extra income by referring me to people for their computer services *For every successful referral that he/she made i'll give 50/computer Special offers: 1. Successful referrals on or before Jan 27 will receive 200/computer, provided that customers reside within JP Rizal. Customers receive a free 2 hour tutorial on computers. 2. Successful referrals on or before Jan 31 and outside JP Rizal will receive 100/computer plus 1 hour free tutorial on computers. 3. Five successful referrals will qualify him/her to receive opportunity to earn 5,000 in cash. Thank you all for your help.