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Old 01-20-2007, 12:03 AM
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I like the topic and approach you take to your article on critical thinking. You leave readers with a lot of ideas to think about and that's great!

Its interesting that one dictionary defines "critical" as "inclined to find fault or to judge." When you're reviewing the article structure, you may wish to rethink the overall tone. Do you wish to be persuasive? Purely Instructive? Judgmental? or simply present information to consider? As it stands, it seems to vary from 'suggesting' to being 'more forceful.'

Sometimes you also speak directly to your reader ("you"), and in other places, its general. You may wish to either personalize or generalize. Consistency with this could make the article more powerful

Overall, its nice to see different points of view.

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