The advice I got from a few SBIers was that I should write in shorter paragraphs and include more white spaces. One suggested that my homepage contains too much information. I was like... what!?
I thought it was too short.
I can understand the part about adding more white spaces, to make my content easier to read, but what's the whole deal with shorter articles? I don't want to write short articles... I want to write long ones that touch the core of a subject and provide insightful thoughts to the reader.
Maybe my phrases are too long? I noticed this myself. I am generally able to break them down into shorter phrases, but I think most of my articles have not been edited in this manner.
What do you think?