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Old 01-06-2007, 03:43 AM   #4 (permalink)
Bitsy
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Originally Posted by impaul99 View Post

I welcome your comments or suggestions if something is still not clear.
Thank you for this article. It was very useful and your explanations are complete, well-articulated and clear. I had no problem at all understanding what was meant by "action." I think I will even purchase the book.

One thing I would just say...if I dare...cleaning up the grammar and typographical errors would give the text a much more professional and "reassuring" feel, as well as facilitate understanding in certain places. I hope you don't take offense...noticing such things has become an "occupational hazard" for me.
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