Rose, I dig the hell out of your story. It seems perfect to me. You see, I was also one of those kids. Not really popular, not really allowed out of the house. (Eventually I came to realize that popularity is overrated, but that's something else.) A thing I love to read about in stories is justice, retribution for being wronged. It feels good to feel that something ended fairly, that you got the last laugh. And, you see, it works because I got the background behind it. If you were a fictional character, due to that and my own life experiences, I could easily get in your corner.
I'm just saying it felt righteously awesome :V
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