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Old 12-05-2008, 03:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
darkun
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Hey Orange,

Please take the following as constructive criticism

There are plenty of income streams you can set up for your site to earn you some income...however on looking at your site I have doubt about your traffic numbers. I'm afraid to say that I couldn't wait to leave your site, in fact my first words when viewing your site were 'oh my god what is that'

Your site looks amateurish and even juvenile with the massive banner and those incredibly huge buttons in nasty colours. Your design needs a major overhaul before I would suggest contacting anyone for advertising.

I think you have some great content but I can't believe many visitors would hang around long enough to read it.

An admirable idea to note every town in Cornwall, however seeing as they aren't links to specific areas I can't understand why they are there.

Finally the google search box is partly swallowed by those town names.

Those are my thoughts on the home page alone, I wasn't inclined to progress further.

All the best with your site mate
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