@Angela: I'm doing a lot of little changes like swapping in different stories to illustrate the points more concisely. I'll also devote more time to the practical application part at the end, so we can walk through two examples instead of just one. There are endless tweaks that can be made to a presentation like this. I felt the first version was a little too cerebral, which made it hard to stay emotionally connected to the audience. My favorite way of maintaining a good connection is to add more humor.
Hay House said they received very positive feedback about the Las Vegas presentation, and it's hard to beat getting a standing ovation at the end, but there are countless ways to keep improving. I never give the exact same speech twice.
@Bruce: Too much coffee today?