Power,
Lessons to Overcome Life's Challenges and Enjoy it Victoriously:
Thankyou for this, you are a profound thinker.
Good article.
The Rocky quotes were excellent and appropriate - but there was WAY to much emphasis on Rocky at the start.
The website looks more like some kind of movie review thing than a PD site.
Also you have to wonder about a PD webite where the first words that hit your eye are Sylvester Stallone?!!!!!!!??!!!
Also there's too many faggy arse gay pictures - people standing on piers, standing on beaches - gay - just GAY. Get rid of that ****.
Why would I want to read all those articles down the side? Who wrote them and why? What is the source? Why did you create the webise? What is the purpose? You MUST adress these questions. WHO are YOU?!!! What have you done with your life that would make me want to spend my time reading your opinions on life?
Give it some ATTITUDE - some ORIGINALITY - not the same ol' ****!!!
Also, the crying face after the words about a little boy crying was terribly corny and seriousy detracted from the seriousness of the article. The one at the end is okay though.
Furthermore, "Breian" - whats this about - a PD webite or somekind of testimony to yourself? Is this your name? If so then STATE WHO YOU ARE and why you created the site.
Did I read the other two articles? No. I already know about intuition and personal power.
I would say that the articles should come BEFORE the movie quotes. Its all about establishing context.
Now, as for Grammar ... well what can I say? I've probably already wounded your ego enough with the above so ... ahem I guess I'll spare you!