The layout of the text (article one) reminds of those long sales pages for products.
I also think that there should be something that seperates your text area from the rest. Get some CMS like wordpress and a standard templete.
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I clearly did state in the beginning that I am developing my writing style/article and need an honest advice about my article/writing and not about web design (although all comments are welcome).
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Your webdesign is that problematic that it prevents people from simply judging the text.