I personally find this writing style resonates very negatively for me. I bought 2 Seth Godin books based on glorious reviews but I didn't make it very far into the first of the two. It just seems like so much tripe, and the short paragraphs read like so much propaganda. I get the same icky feeling from this article.
That said, I do appreciate your experimentation with different styles, and though others may really like this format, I thought it was important to share another opinion.