NS - thanks! I would be interested in finding out which parts are confusing so that I can express them better. If you wouldn't mind making a comment or two it might point me in the right direction.
I have the whole "story" in my head with all the details connecting very well together. Expressing the story in words is quite a challenge, because a great deal of it was communicated psychically - without words - in images and concepts.
I will try and get the story completed as soon as possible. It will take a while though.
I'm tempted to tell you a detail about Kim, about who she turns out to be... but that would take much of the fun out of reading the complete story...
Very kind comments though, thank you. I am indeed considering the ideas you wrote, like turning it into a book. |