Hey Erin, this is a minor thing (like cyber Toastmasters haha!) watch out for your usage of the word "It's"... for example in the 5th paragraph from last:
"It’s general goal is to notify you that you are in danger or at a vital decision-making moment in your life."
Here you should be using "Its" instead of "It's". Anytime you use "It's", ask yourself if the long form "It is" would also be appropriate. If not, you should be using "Its".
I just see many people making this grammar mistake and don't want to see someone as cerebral as yourself making it ;-)
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