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Old 04-23-2008, 08:01 AM   #14 (permalink)
Keith
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Originally Posted by seeker5 View Post
Well, I really like the description of the book from the amazon.com, so kudos to whoever wrote that.
I totally agree, with one small suggested tweak:
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Originally Posted by Amazon.com
You’ll see how to become the conscious creator of your life instead of feeling hopelessly adrift
I'd make that "You'll learn how to". "See" sounds passive, IMO.
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