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Old 03-12-2008, 03:44 AM
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Hi Steve,

I think this design is at best mediocre. The blue and red is fine, but the typography is frankly ugly, particularly your name.

I hope you don't mind, I made a version I like more (couldn't quite reproduce the red and blue, so did something similar for them.) I think this version is cleaner and slightly more sophisticated.



Thoughts anyone? I hope this is a good basis for comparison. Also, I dropped the "personal" from "personal growth", since you've already said "personal" in "personal development" and you can make the text fit nicer that way.

(One small thing, I am not that happy with the font I have used for "SMART PEOPLE", but I'm struggling to find a better one and it's 3:45 in the morning here!)

Cheers,
--Robin
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