It looks kind of corporate to me, as opposed to whooo-whooo. I think that will work well for you in your speaking engagements and seminars, and be a subconscious reassurance to possible left-brain readers who want real, now-results. I think the more right-brainy, peace-love-posters set may find it a bit angular.
As soon as a reader leafs through, though, I'm pretty confident that most smart people will be drawn in. |