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Naturally no body gets forced to do it by the manual.
It depends also a bit on the club. In some clubs the evualator concentrates primarly on the objective that the manual defines and in some clubs the feedback is more on the overall performance.
Talking to your evaluator and telling him in advance that you didn't try to build your speech on a specific purpose and that you want more general feedback on your delivery might be a good idea.
In the future I would recommand you to read the manual before writing a speech. By focusing on a specific aspects of your speech you can better improve as a speaker.
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I'll just talk to my evaluator before hand, tell him/her what happened (flash of inspiration, didn't follow manual) and ask him to pay specific attention to tonality/voice and body language which are my biggest problems.
In the future I'll be building a speech up from the manual.
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In our time we are constantly bombarded with advertising.
It's designed to unconsciously take away our responsibility of choosing how we spend our money.
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Ah I like that sentence much better thanks. I'll probably still use 'in this time and age' simply because I like saying it (sounds good me thinks) and I'll be double using it in the speech (two sentences in a row) adding strength to the point.