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Trezker · 02-13-2008, 10:18 AM

I liked the post and appreciated the explaining of why you're not posting about the topic more than you have. But I have to agree with people, I think hinting at the product in the post title and making a short introduction to the service before anything else would've been a good thing for everyone. Other than that the post is excellent as usual.

I think the main reason to make that one change is that some of your readers are not interested and with a deceiving start you kind of force them to start reading something that they don't want to finish.

One solution could be to split the post. First one that explains why you're no longer trying to teach people how to build online businesses and a hint that next post you're gonna advertise a service. Then the "advertising" by itself in its own post. I actually thought the post was quite long to read...

02-13-2008, 10:18 AM	#23 (permalink)
Trezker Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 865	I liked the post and appreciated the explaining of why you're not posting about the topic more than you have. But I have to agree with people, I think hinting at the product in the post title and making a short introduction to the service before anything else would've been a good thing for everyone. Other than that the post is excellent as usual. I think the main reason to make that one change is that some of your readers are not interested and with a deceiving start you kind of force them to start reading something that they don't want to finish. One solution could be to split the post. First one that explains why you're no longer trying to teach people how to build online businesses and a hint that next post you're gonna advertise a service. Then the "advertising" by itself in its own post. I actually thought the post was quite long to read...