Let me argue a bit. Perhaps, I'm just envious, because, when I wanted to post some poems and stories with a taste of bitterness, I just didn't do it. Here is why:
Look at the section's name.
"Fun & Recreation - Travel, vacationing, enjoying life, pleasurable experiences, adventure, games, jokes, humorous stories"
Now, Akashic_Librarian, where is fun in your poem?
Where is humor? Where are jokes? Pleasurable experiences maybe?
I label your post "offtopic".
Good poem, btw
