[Akashic_Librarian]

I havn't written a poem in about three or four months, so I thought I should write another one and this is what I came up with. Feedback, and ego stroking welcome.

Struggle

Wake me up, before I die.
Staring, awkwardly to the sky,
lying there, hold me close.
As I stare; comatose.

Sleep so long.
It feels so wrong.
My soul's undone,
I cry for fun.

Red drops of liquid eternity,
life force flowing.
My life force, going.
My life force, slowing.

Dead eyes staring at a world unreal.
Dead heart beating, the blood; my seal.
Your soul is lost, to the Forever Forge.
One last time I cry.

I can feel it.
My life force flowing,
going. Slowing.
Gone.

One last time, I live the lie.
I watch you rise,
and then
you die.

To put it in context, its about a couple, and the man is in a Coma. The wife is sad, and its like a conversation between them. If you get what I mean.