[AttractIt]

Hi James,

I unfortunately agree with Gordon, and I will explain,
there is only one reason,
And tell you the truth, as an article it looks great, you probably get and A if you had to hand it over in school,

so, where's the problem?

it's like a speech,

Poeple on the Internet don't want to read a speech,
(It's like all those company who start their web site as
Welcome to ..... we are a respectful company since....bla bla bla) who cares?

Only the ones who are still interesting in what you have, after they read the whole article!

so, take it a constructive criticism,

Cheers