Originally Posted by wolfgang
Actually me as a guy didn't say don't use the letter, but did say change it to a poem with a gift. I did say no to devolging so much of the "I love you" stuff though. There can be a fun period of falling in love - that hasn't happened on both sides or isn't the right time to declare, even if it is true that both are in love. Got date and hug and kiss and then really fall in love, then it will roll off your tongue - "I love you"
I didn't mean to misrepresent you. I apologize.
Sly, I think tweaking a couple of things like Rose suggested is a great idea. And being and creating freedom like Angela mentioned takes away all of the chance of awkwardness and leaves you with the expression of your true feelings without expectation. That is a beautiful place to be.
I wish you the best. I can't wait to hear what happens!