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ellie · 12-02-2007, 03:35 AM

Interesting, because I read the first few paragraphs on your page, scrolled down, saw a lot more text and kind of switched off.

I feels there's just way too much information on there.

12-02-2007, 03:35 AM	#20 (permalink)
ellie Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 753	Interesting, because I read the first few paragraphs on your page, scrolled down, saw a lot more text and kind of switched off. I feels there's just way too much information on there.