Ninja, ellie, JimOfferman, Spiritual, and Frans, thank you guys!
I know the site looks "scammy" right now, and therein lies the internal conflict...
I've been talking with some professional copywriters (people who make websites that sell products online) and most of them use this format, and they use it and make money doing it.
I've actually posted it up to have it critiqued by these pro's and most of them say that overall it looks good. Which is confusing...
All the studies say that this long scrolling sales letter does the best for sales, but whenever I show it to anyone I get a "scammy" kind of response.
I don't really get it...
How do these types of pages sell product?
And P.S. They are hard to write too, do a word count on the site

Lottts of writing